Causal Rewrite-Baahubali

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As the king of pop was laid to rest, numerous fans’ hearts broke into pieces. A voice that made them upbeat and blissful, vanished into paradise. Since Michael Jackson had a part of fans, it was difficult for them to acknowledge his passing which caused his fans to commit suicide and others were in refusalA few fans went through colossal sum of sadness. The thought that he was possibly still lively was not sufficient to support their hearts. As before long as the news broke out that Michael Jackson has passed, numerous fans around the world made numerous tributes to him and regarded him in a few ways. They held dedications, candle lights, and put blooms at places that he has set foot. It was a pitiful time for the world. Numerous fans felt like they were with him each step of his life and all of a sudden he was gone. Numerous fans appeared up to the burial service and cried alongside their family individuals. Since he was such a special ability and a motivation, it was difficult for fans to acknowledge his passing and were rationally influenced by his passing.

Many fans have lost hope that Michael Jackson would never come back again and their inspiration was gone from this world. Fans could not bare the news of his death and did not how to cope with the loss.  Most fans created sadness when he passed, which lead to 12 individuals commit suicide after agreeing to the pioneer of his fan club. This shows us that how much he had his impact around the world. Since this was such an concerning issue, the suicide cases lead to respectful right dissident, Jesse Jackson, to talk out around the issue and threat with respect to the suicide. She made a video on YouTube with respect to the suicide cases to anticipate others from committing suicide and to possibly diminish the number of suicide cases. The message was expressed as “We fall down sometimes, we get back up. That’s the right thing to do. In Michael’s name let’s live together as brothers and sisters and not die apart as fools” (Jesse Jackson). The YouTube video was spread all over from social media outlets to news channels for fans who seem not to adapt with the misfortune. They got the support and consolation that they required which motivated them to proceed their life and honour him. Fans started rallies, candle marches, events where they laid flowers, and memorials. His music too made a difference by laminating fans with the misfortune. Especially, his melody, You Are Not Alone.  Numerous fans associated to the verses and had a feeling in their heart that he was still lively. Due to the recordings and back the fans gotten, the number of suicide rates were exceptionally few . In case the recordings and endeavors were not made, at that point the suicide rates seem have expanded to millions of individuals in committing suicide.

The reaction of his death was so intense that it had caused Internet Trafficking. Social media outlets such as Twitter, Facebook, YouTube hits, and Google were jammed. This appeared how impactful his passing was. Virgin Media stated “It was the first time we have had so many crashing problems since 9/11 attack”. People want to reach out via social media outlets about his death which caused crashing problems. During his live broadcasting of his funeral, 31 million viewers were watching this excluding the attendees. Celebrities gave speeches, provided performances, and attended his funeral. They represented his friendship, wonderful heart, and the hero he was to millions of people.

Despite the fact that he was laid to rest, fans still believe that he is still alive. It was hard for his fans to believe that he was gone for good to a whole new different world. His fan following has caused a huge impact around the world and his death has caused an even bigger impact. Many fans have suffered a lot when he passed. Fans have developed depression and committed suicide. But, most fans found hope through his music and through honouring him in several ways such as memorials and tributes. Many fans felt like they were a part of his life and shared their experiences online. It caused an intense amount of attention which caused internet trafficking. Fans believed that even if he was laid to rest, his music and legacy would never disappear. He inspired a whole generation through fan following about living your dream and never giving up on life. Fans have kept that in their hearts and continued to carry his words in their everyday lives. There is not a single a day where someone forgets who Michael Jackson really was and what he has done for the world and his fans. His words still inspire the world to keep believing in themselves and to live life to the fullest. Jackson always said “If you enter this world knowing you are loved and you leave this world knowing the same, then everything that happens in between can be dealt with”. Fans loved him and Michael Jackson knew he was loved when he died as well. He full filled his life, but his legacy still inspires.

References

“Fans of Jackson stricken with grief commit suicide.” The Perez Hilton, (30, 2009 9:00am PDT) https://perezhilton.com/2009-06-30-fans-of-jackson-stricken-with-grief-commit-suicide/

 Colothan, Scott, “12 Michael Jackson Fans ‘Commit Suicide’ In Wake of His Death.” Gigwise, (09:52 30th June 2009) https://www.gigwise.com/news/51468/

Jasmeeen, “Michael Jackson’s death- how did it effect the media?” wcsfmedia, wordpress (September 6, 2013) https://wcsfmedia.wordpress.com/2013/09/06/michael-jacksons-death-how-did-it-effect-the-media/

Quote; “If you enter this world knowing you are loved and you leave this world knowing the same, then everything that happens in between can be dealt with.” http://www.top10-best.com/m/top_10_best_michael_jackson_quotes.html

2 thoughts on “Causal Rewrite-Baahubali”

  1. Baahubali, much of your English grammar sounds as if it has been generated by a translation program from another language. The html coding behind your text supports this observation. Many paragraphs are studded with dozens of coded “synonym” choices for the words you’ve eventually chosen. This creates confusion for your readers, who have to work hard to guess at your meaning.

    For example:

    Since this was such an concerning issue, the suicide cases lead to respectful right dissident, Jesse Jackson, to talk out around the issue and threat with respect to the suicide. She made a video on YouTube with respect to the suicide cases to anticipate others from committing suicide and to possibly diminish the number of suicide cases.

    My best guess is that you mean:

    Since this was such an issue of grave concern, the suicides led respected civil rights activist Jesse Jackson to speak out about the issue and the danger of more suicides. He made a video on YouTube in the hope of preventing other suicides.

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  2. When you say:

    Fans started rallies, candle marches, events where they laid flowers, and memorials. His music too made a difference by laminating fans with the misfortune. Especially, his melody, You Are Not Alone. Numerous fans associated to the verses and had a feeling in their heart that he was still lively. Due to the recordings and back the fans gotten, the number of suicide rates were exceptionally few . In case the recordings and endeavors were not made, at that point the suicide rates seem have expanded to millions of individuals in committing suicide.

    Your readers “translate” to:

    Fans started rallies, marched with candles, and laid flowers at memorial sites. His music too made a difference by insulating fans from the catastrophe of his death. In particular, the lyrics to his song “You are not Alone” touched the hearts of his fans and suggested that he was still alive. Having his records to listen to saved many of his fans from suicide. Without them, millions might have killed themselves.

    I’m really guessing here, Baahubali. My version seems reasonable, but coming up with it required far too much interpretation on my part.

    This is not an isolated example. I could repeat the exercise in most of your paragraphs and perhaps decide correctly what you mean. But your work in English should not require translation into English.

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