If a primary caretaker has a negative attitude toward their child it increases the risk that they’re child will grow up hostile towards others. And its not just aggression toward others that results from child abuse; a large amount of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this negative behavior is because the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling lifes disappointments. If you aren’t raised with coping skills, your much to likely to act ‘inappropriately’ then if you have developed more reasonable approaches. The affect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers”, is that everyone gets the child they deserve.
A primary caretaker’s negative attitude towards her child increases the risk that, her child will grow hostile towards others. It’s not just aggression towards others that results from child abuse; a large number of children raised by abusive parents also harm themselves. The reason for this is, the children don’t learn appropriate techniques for handling life’s disappointments. With no coping skills, people are more likely to act “inappropriately” than if they had (coping skills). The effect of poor parenting as reported by Dr. Geoffrey Dahmer in “The Bully Papers,” states that everyone gets the child they deserve.
Counterintuitive 
Mostly wonderful work here, King, but you’ve introduced errors of your own: some odd and unnecessary commas, a peculiar set of parentheses, and a weird construction in which an effect states.
You missed a number disagreement in the last sentence.
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