Robust Verbs- 3g

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts. It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug. The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin. It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital. It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.

 

  1. “There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime rate due to the addicts.”

-The problem is heroin addicts committing crimes in Vancouver

-Save the program part for later

Heroin addicts in Vancouver produce a large crime rate in order to support their habits.

2. “It is obvious that addicts have a hard time getting through their day to day lives. Daily activities such as jobs, interactions, and relationships are hard to maintain because of the fact that they are using. By heroin users being addicted, they will do whatever they have to do to get their hands on the drug.”

-Addicts have a hard time getting the drug.

-The drug effects their whole life.

-Will do whatever it takes to get heroin.

An addiction to heroin makes every part of life difficult, especially obtaining and keeping jobs. Without a steady income, heroin addicts have trouble funding their addiction, and instead turn to crime to obtain the drug.

3. “The types of crimes committed are those of breaking and entering as well as stealing. There are no limits to where they will go to retrieve this drug so that they can feed their addiction. The problem with this program is that it won’t help to ween these addicts off using heroin.”

-Addicts will commit any crime, like breaking and entering.

-Now mentions the program.

-Program does not try to ween them off heroin.

Heroin addicts will commit any type of crime to get their hands on drugs, some of the most common kinds are breaking and entering or stealing. The “Free Heroin for Addicts” program is making an effort to stop these crimes, but not by weening the addicts off of heroin.

4. “It is only trying to save the city from rising crime rates that they’re up to. By providing the drug, these addicts will be off the streets, which in turn will prevent them from committing minor street crimes. This will also keep the heroin users out of the hospital.”

-Gives the addicts drugs to they stay off the streets committing crimes.

-The don’t clog the hospitals or jails.

This program offers free heroin to addicts to keep them from committing misdemeanors, thus keeping more addicts from clogging the jails, and the program also help to keeps these addicts out of the hospital.

5.” It is pointless that the hospitals have to deal with people that want to use bad drugs or unsanitary needles and find themselves being unable to afford hospital bills and hard to cope without the drug. This program gives people free heroin in the cleanest way possible. This will in turn fix the city  but not the addiction that these people face.”

-Give clean needles.

-Saves them from debt.

-Will not fix the real problem.

Many addicts find themselves in hospitals from unsanitary needles or drugs, by giving them clean needles and free drugs, this saves many the hassle and large hospitals bills. Though this will help Vancouver, this program does not solve the real problem which is the addiction that these people face everyday.

 

New paragraph:

Heroin addicts in Vancouver produce a large crime rate in order to support their habits. An addiction to heroin makes every part of life difficult, especially obtaining and keeping jobs. Without a steady income, heroin addicts have trouble funding their addiction, and instead turn to crime to obtain the drug. Heroin addicts will commit any type of crime to get their hands on drugs, some of the most common kinds are breaking and entering or stealing. The “Free Heroin for Addicts” program is making an effort to stop these crimes, but not by weening the addicts off of heroin. This program offers free heroin to addicts to keep them from committing misdemeanors, thus keeping more addicts from clogging the jails, and the program also help to keeps these addicts out of the hospital. Many addicts find themselves in hospitals from unsanitary needles or drugs, by giving them clean needles and free drugs, this saves many the hassle and large hospitals bills. Though this will help Vancouver, this program does not solve the real problem which is the addiction that these people face everyday.

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