Professor Hodges, I could use some help getting started with my causal argument. Should I state that dehydration is caused from not drinking water or that a way to avoid dehydration is to stay hydrated? I know that there is a connection between both hydration and dehydration but I am unsure on how to write 1000 words on this, I also am stuck on what type of sources to search for in order to support or oppose what I am trying to say. I do not want to go in the wrong direction and I also do not want this to be too similar to my definition argument that I posted last week. What is your opinion on how I should approach this argument?
- When you do not drink enough water you can become dehydrated and possibly pass out.
- Dehydration is caused from not hydrating enough, the amount of water needed to stay hydrated is eight, 8-ounce classes daily.
- The effects of dehydration are….. while the cause of all this is not drinking enough water.
My opinion is that you’re not being specific enough about the actual mechanics of hydration/dehydration. Ultimately it won’t matter whether the material first appeared in your Definition or your Causal essay. As you have figured out, there’s plenty of overlap. (Dehydration might be a “physical state,” but it can’t be separated from the process that creates it.)
So. Sources. Let’s see what we can find.
I did two quick searches on Google Scholar and got some good hits.
—To reproduce my search results, use the following phrase in quotation marks in the Google Scholar search field: “dehydration and rehydration”
http://www.dtic.mil/docs/citations/ADA559016
Army research on internal body systems for soldiers:
https://europepmc.org/abstract/med/593078
Study of high school athletes who lost weight by restricting fluids:
—To reproduce my search results, use the following phrase in quotation marks in the Google Scholar search field: dehydration “human physiology”
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC1322918/
From the Journal of Athletic Training:
https://physoc.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1111/j.1469-7793.1998.895ba.x
My favorite measures blood flow during prolonged exercise. This provides an understandable explanation for the problems dehydration causes.
http://www.comprehensivephysiology.com/WileyCDA/CompPhysArticle/refId-c130017.html
Brilliant stuff that really explains the problem of dehydration at a cellular level. It’s science-y, but accessible enough for me to gather the gist of it.
How many hundred words is that? Seriously, BG04, the way to write 1000 words about dehydration is to research what dehydration is. These few articles alone, which I found in five minutes, offer a wide range of entirely pertinent information on the changes that occur in the human body during exercise and other extreme stresses (heat, prolonged strain, fluid deprivation). You’ll be able to share real insights into WHY it’s important to drink enough water if you’re going to be outdoors for 16 hours at the next Made In America festival.
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Your response is very much appreciated and helpful. Thank you for clearing things up for me, I will do the best that I can on this 1000 word paper and look forward to your feedback on it as well after tomorrow!
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